Final Version of 55 word story

Standing at the steel doors glaring down at the warm blooded body of my father. Slowly I’m watching his breath decrease.

“Father?!” I said.

Apathetically I ponder as I watched closely at my father’s face. All I can view was this warm hearted man with a cold body lying. It was his time to go.

WARM-UP

COMPLETELY out of the earth thought today!
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V2. Time has come

Standing at the steel doors viewing down at the warm blooded body of my father. Slowly I’m watching his breath decrease.

“Father?!” I said.

Apathetically I ponder as I watched closely at my father’s face. All I can view was this
warm hearted man with a cold body lying. It was his time to go.

Through glistening shadows of my struggle path
Never has there been…
anyone
blindly enough to see
Fearlessly engaging to the path full of lust
Your chain of sterling silver started to rust away in my solitude

Cooling dark breezes shouts firmly through me tonight
reminiscing that you’re the guided fate
to which, can sober away this clear water
But than you turn out to be my
biggest fear

Laughing away at miserable times
Treating our decisions like a piece of
emptiness
Reconsidering the flaws I’ve done
Deciding to take on the knowledge and so…
I drifted away

Downfalls creeps slowly at my conscious
sinking shallowly into our open sea
You can’t underestimate,
but progression yield’s to time

Knotted with the toughest words and emotions
Understanding the toughest Greek warrior still
Can’t maintain…
Breaking down strenuously can lead to suicide
Standing alone with no one in sight to view

Singing in tunes of death with this knife
Tonight I’ll leave a puddle of lavish red water
The black world is calling out towards me
Slowly… creeping…
away from reality’s image

Slurping down your lovable lust
Swimming in blood like a
beautiful black dove
Flashing memories of a rainbow full of
laughter…
Till today I’m still living in a fantasy dream